Deadline: 26 Oct, 10:56 PM (4h)

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Revision instructions are as follows:

INSTRUCTIONS NOT FOLLOWED:Please look at the working draft layout.

The introduction should include a hook/attention getter in one or two sentences; background information about the topic; background information about how the topic exists in the region/country you are covering; justification for choosing this research (Why should your topic should matter to society?); an argumentative thesis statement that takes a side and includes the three main supporting evidence you plan to use to back up your claim (these are the three main sections of your paper below, using more or less the same wording).

The heading of each main section should be centered. The heading of each main section should be followed by a small introductory paragraph that remind the reader of the main research topic and how this entire first Argument/Supporting Evidence fits in and supports your thesis.

Also, each main section should have at least two to three sub points. The headings for the sub points should be left aligned.

Again, please look at the working draft layout!!

Thank you for cooperation.

Best regards,
Florence
Support team