Make these corrections for each section:

instructions :Abstract

150-250 word summary of study in the following order:

•          The general area under consideration

•          The hypothesis

•          Summary of Method section

•          List of results in words, no numbers

•          Mentions the implications (i.e., meaning) of the findings and (optional) ideas for future research

Introduction (15)

Presents a general overview of the research area.

Lists a clear statement of purpose of the study.

Relevant literature is reviewed and synthesized. (3)

Literature reviewed clearly leads the reader to the study hypothesis. (5)

List the specific research question(s) and hypothesis/es (4)

**** For this section DO  

-First sentence can be worded different! this will make you’re intro Stronger! 

-Need to list your future findings

-I noticed there are some grammar errors and some of the articles cited has the wrong dates

Also remember to be clear on your group’s research questions and hypotheses at the end of the introduction

Remember to mention what is new/different about this study, 

Probably do not need to add all of the different forms of aggression in your abstract, when you restate it in the methods it should have everything but I think it is too much in the abstract.